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熟さずに 落ちる果実の 恨めしさ(じゅくさずに おちるかじつの うらめしさ)

Literal Translation: without ripening, fruit falls, reproachful.

1) Free Translation: It is sorrowful that fruit falls without ripening.

  "熟さずに落ちる果実" may mean a young immature person.

2) Structure: 5-7-5

3) Human Being or Human Society: Human society

4) Nature or Season: No KIGO, but images before fall.

5) Motivation of making HAIKU: I am sorry to say, in recent years there are many infanticides in Japan.

6) Technics: the image of "熟さずに落ちる果実"

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