HAIKU easy

Another of my works is,

天窓を 見上げて眠る 寒い夜(てんまどを みあげてねむる さむいよる)

Literal Translation: to the skylight, look up and sleep, cold night.

1) Free Translation: I look up at the skylight then sleep in cold night.

2) Structure: 5-7-5

3) Human Being or Human Society: Human being, the author

4) Nature or Season: Season, 寒い夜 is KIGO of winter.

5) Motivation of making HAIKU: I feel sorrow and go to bed.

6) Technics: express the psychological landscape by cold night and skylight, where the stars are shining.

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