HAIKU easy

In TANKA(5-7-5-7-7) love songs make major part, but in HAIKU I feel a little short of words to express them.

Now I present the major part in HAIKU, "nature and season". One of my works is,

風光る 緑の芝の 茂る里(かぜひかる みどりのしばの しげるさと)

Literal Translation: The wind shines, of green grass(turf), grows in the village.

1) Free Translation: There are green grass growing in the village where the wind shines.

2) Structure: 5-7-5

3) Human Being or Human Society: Human society, the sound village where the wind shines.

4) Nature or Season: KAZE HIKARU(the wind shines) is KIGO of spring.

5) Motivation of making HAIKU: a sound village or home

6) Technics: Double meanings of green grass(green and sound) and comparison of wind color(~shines) and green

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