HAIKU easy

Everyone, thank you for waiting, I present special HAIKU technique, is "love".

In TANKA or WAKA, which has 5-7-5-7-7 structure, the subjects of love are major part.

But I am sorry to say, in HAIKU, they may be too short for expressing love affairs.

One of my works is,

たしなめる 様な素顔が 素敵な子(たしなめる ようなすがおが すてきなこ)

Literal Translation: reproving, real face is like, charming girl.

1) Free Translation: I feel the girl charming, who has her face like reproving.

2) Structure: 5-7-5

3) Human Being or Human Society: Human being, the girl and the author

4) Nature or Season: no season, no KIGO, but the season of starting love may be spring in students. The school in Japan begins spring April.

5) Motivation of making HAIKU: Her face is very impressive.

6) Technics: Everyone doesn't usually feel that way.

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