HAIKU easy

Another one is,

冷えてない 西瓜を皆で 平らげる(ひえてない すいかをみなで たいらげる)

Literal Translation: not cool, a watermelon by all boys, eat up.

1) Free Translation: All boys ate up a warm watermelon (on the beach).

  Japanese boys play "西瓜割り(break a watermelon by wooden stick, 木刀)" on the beach, then eat up. Big watermelon is just size!

2) Structure: 5-7-5

3) Human Being or Human Society: Human being, young boys

4) Nature or Season: Season. Watermelon is KIGO of early autumn, though MIZU-ASOBI(water + play) is KIGO of summer.

5) Motivation of making HAIKU: friendship between young boys

6) Technics: Though a watermelon is not cool, it may be delicious for them.

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