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HONKA(ancient poem everyone know): 奥山に 紅葉踏みわけ 鳴く鹿の 声きく時ぞ 秋は悲しき(famous TANKA)

Literal Translation: in deep mountains, steps on and divides the red leaves(the autumn leaves), a deer crows, when I hear the barks, the fall is sorrowful(I miss autumn).

HONKADORI(my work): 踏み分ける 山の遠くに 鹿の声(ふみわける やまのとおくに しかのこえ)

Literal Translation: steps on and divides, far in the mountains, deer barks.

1) Free Translation: I hear a deer barks apart from long distance in mountains where I step on and divide grasses.

2) Structure: 5-7-5

3) Human Being or Human Society: Human being, the author

4) Nature or Season: summer, HONKA's season is fall. A deer is KIGO of fall, he searches a wife and crows in autumn.

  The combination of a deer and red leaves are the famous picture of HANAFUDA(Japanese traditional cards). NINTENDO is one of the company making this cards.

5) Motivation of making HAIKU: only studies on HONKADORI

6) Technics: HONKADORI

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