HAIKU easy
Now we will study HONKADORI technique using my works from this week.
HONKA(ancient proverb everyone know): 鉄は熱いうちに打て
Literal Translation: Hit the iron while it's hot.
HONKADORI(my work): 熱いうち 鉄を打っても 報われず(あついうち てつをうっても むくわれず)
Literal Translation: while it's hot, who hitted the iron, not be rewarded.
1) Free Translation: Someone is not rewarded who hitted the iron while it's hot.
2) Structure: 5-7-5
3) Human Being or Human Society: Human being
4) Nature or Season: no season, no KIGO
5) Motivation of making HAIKU: no comment
6) Technics: the HONKADORI of famous proverb
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